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Celestial Soul: Page 5by *Purrlstar

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DUN. DUN. DUUUUUUN....

and I leave you with a mysterious talk bubble from a mysterious cat, that gray kitty is obviously afraid of.....

tune in next time to watch the conclusion of the gray kitty who wandered to close to home...

The last panel is my fave <3

Lazy backgrounds are lazy.

~8spyroncynder8 Jan 8, 2011

I really love your comic so far, very interesting!

*Purrlstar Jan 8, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thankyou

~8spyroncynder8 Jan 8, 2011

Np! ^^

~joek09 Jan 8, 2011 Student General Artist

Ooooo, very nice page.

so this is the second to last panel?

Or are you just saying that it's the conclusion of his walk?
Anyway, either way, it's a very nice lead in, lots of drama and build up, nicely writen and illustrated.

I think the backgrounds are alright, I do like your brick pattern a lot in the first one, nice variation.

I like his expression too... can't pinpoint what the word to describe it is, but it works perfectly.

The 2nd one's edge gets a bit odd though, is the space inbetwen the wall and grey fence supposed to be where he's heading? And is it a gap somewhere, or is it like a hall? If it's a hall/walkway, then add a bit more depth to the brick wall in the back. You could do that by showing where the bottom of the wall his the ground where it goes back into space, and seeing a bit of that walkway... if that makes sense. :/

If it is a gap though, it looks alright, maybe make it a bit wider though.

And his expression and everything about him in the third panel is done pretty amazingly, loving the tension, the fear and nervousness, great display of his emotions at that point in time. And a good cliffhanger!

*Purrlstar Jan 8, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

It's just the conclusion of his walk, we're almost half way through the first chapter of the comic, and the comic will have at least twenty chapters, depending on how long it takes me to set up the major events, and then play them out ;D

It's supposed to be a gap of some sort, in my drawing of their home, its a narrow hall that leads to a dead-end with a fire escape

and the thing you're calling a gray fence I think is the dumpster xD I dont' know what those things look like, and I didn't want to waste my time to look one up xD

The hardest part for me in the last pannel was defenately his left hind leg, and the paw on his right front. the paw was fun, the leg was irritating xDDD I got it to work though~

Like I said, I didn't really put much effort into this page, I reallyjust want to get the story moving x3

~joek09 Jan 8, 2011 Student General Artist

Ah, gotcha, haha.

Awesomeeee~

Can't wait for more.

Oh, I see, makes sense then.

See, that's what I first thought, but then I changed it to fence... :/ I needed to go with my gut instinct.

Hehe, you did pull it off very well indeed~

Haha

It still looks good though.

~Sapphire98 Jan 8, 2011 Hobbyist

Moar, i want!

Mysterious kitty 1 2 or 3?

*Purrlstar Jan 8, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I dunno what you mean? xD

~Sapphire98 Jan 8, 2011 Hobbyist

lol it doesn't matter, i'm just messin' wit yah!

~BlazingRiver Jan 8, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

ene next page!! I HATE CLIFF HANGERS

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